Mahape a ale wala’au

mahapeTitle: Mahape a ale wala’au
Author: Paul G. Bens, Jr.
Publisher: http://www.torquerebooks.com
Genre: Gay fiction
Length: short story (Torquere single shot)
Rating: 5 stars out of 5

THE BLURB

Giving himself a new name for his vacation in Waikiki, businessman Toshi searches for just the right experience to make his time off memorable. When he meets performance artist Kristopher at the beach, he thinks he might have found what he’s looking for, so he works up his courage and approaches the man. Kristopher is willing to play, and soon he and Toshi are indulging in an increasingly sensual game. Feeling bold and free where no one knows him, Toshi challenged Kristopher to have a little fun. Can they win at the game and find something that satisfies them both?

THE REVIEW

This is a delightful short story which packed a lot into 24 pages (10,000 words). Mahape a ale wala’au is the first book I have had the pleasure of reading by author Paul G. Bens, Jr. and I soon became addicted to his prose. The story is told in Toshi’s voice and I was constantly amazed at how much can be imparted about a character when a story is told from the first person POV.

Toshi’s shy personality is revealed through the layers in the story as the author peels back his emotions from the first day he arrives in Waikiki, trying to escape his stifling life in Japan as one of millions who toil every day to earn a living. His innocence and awe at his new surroundings and those around him as he realizes what he’s been missing helps to make this story a wonderful read. There is no HEA and I’m not giving away any secrets because Toshi makes it clear what he’s looking for in this exotic island paradise among the baked bodies lying in the sun. You can feel the atmosphere as he describes the smell of rain, the humidity, the tourists shopping for bargains, the natives with their wonderful firm bodies and the Waikiki regulars – several older gay men who take him under their wing.

The first time he sees Kristopher he is posing as a statue of Rodin for the tourists in the International Marketplace and during the hour he watched him their eyes met once and Toshi was hooked. He met Kristopher in person a few days later when he spied him on the beach and went over to make his acquaintance. They hit it off immediately and Toshi was entranced with his new companion who brought out an adventurous side to his personality that he never knew he had, as they explored each other. As they shared more of their stories and philosophies they got closer and Toshi knew that his companion was the key to realizing his dream of being “something more” and we, the readers accompany him on his sensual and sexual journey of self discovery.

As I went along with the characters on their ride I realized what a superb storyteller Paul G. Bens, Jr. is as he paints pictures the way an artist does on a canvas. I became so immersed in the story and the wonderfully drawn characters it was as if I was living it and experiencing all the “firsts” with Toshi, including the great sex. Toshi’s personality totally changed in the 24 hours he was with Kristopher, from the man he was when he arrived on the island to someone who became aware of his potential as a human being. Mahape a ale wala’au which means in Hawaiian “Don’t speak. Keep it in your heart” will always be a special story for me as I watched from the sidelines Toshi’s evolution into “something more.” Buy this book.

You can experience more of Kristopher from Mahape at http://www.paulbens.com/mahape.html “which is not really a short story as much as a tour of the Hawaiian islands from Kristopher’s point of view” (the author’s words).

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8 comments

  • I do read other books than romance you know 😀 I can appreciate good writing too. But I understand what you mean. 😉 I’ll still try to keep the book in mind. It does have the Hawaii setting as a bonus 😉

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  • Mary
    Mahape is not a romance (at least I don’t consider it a romance). It’s more erotica and there’s definitely no HEA or HFN.

    If you’re looking for love in the afternoon you might want to look further afield. I was really impressed by the WRITING and pictures that the author drew in my mind, but your taste in stories run to romances and it would be a real stretch to describe Mahape as such. Having said that, I really loved the book for different reasons.

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  • I thought the title sounded polynesian or something similar :).

    Hmmm… no HEA, huh? I can deal with HFN, except the way you spoke about it made it sound like they just part ways at the end, happy to have met each other but ready to move on and it’s not what I like to read romance for. Plus, there’s the dreaded 1st person POV *sigh* However it has to have impressed you a lot to make you rergret not having out it in your top 10…so I’ll find it a spot on the ‘maybe’ list 😉

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  • Hi Paul
    The book was memorable, in a very good way, as I journeyed with Toshi and Kristopher for their HFN. If you ever do write a follow up story please let me know.

    Lily
    Thank you. I much prefer an honest ending to a story than a manufactured and fake HEA – you have heard me say that many times. These 2 guys packed a lot of living in 24 hours together.

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  • Hey Wave,
    Great review as always! I really love this book as well. Paul’s writing is wonderful, you end up feeling almost as if you experienced the story and not just read it. I loved Toshi and Kristopher, and even if it didn’t have the HEA I usually want, I was still very happy to have read the book.
    Lily 😀

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  • Thank you so much Jesse. You are too kind. I’m glad you liked it. I keep looking for another story for these two guys, but nothing really comes immediately to mind. If I come up with something, I’ll let you know. =-)

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