Love’s Return

Title: Love’s Return
Author: Trina Lane
Publisher: Pride Publishing
Buy link: Amazon.com
Genre: Contemporary
Length: Novella (84 pages/20K words)
Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

A Guest Review by Aunt Lynn

One Sentence Review: The second alpha/beta story in a week that has left me feeling a little “meh.”

THE BLURB

Dean Whitten is determined to make the best of yet another Valentine’s Day spent alone. But his past comes back in a big way when the stunning specimen of manhood he admires while in line at the movies turns out to be Eric Sparks. Fifteen years ago, Eric left the country with his military family, and their budding relationship met its end.

Just out of the Marine Corps, Eric finds that his dormant feelings for Dean erupt when he once again holds the love he lost in his arms. But Dean is settled in his life, and Eric is starting over. Can love be given a second chance? Will life give them the opportunity denied all those years ago, or will it once again separate the two men?

THE REVIEW

Dean and Eric were best friends for three years in their mid to late teens until Eric’s family had to move abroad, but before they parted, they had a summer of love and discovery. Now 15 years later, Dean is a pediatrician leading a pretty lonely life. Resigned to spend a fulfilling anti-Valentine’s Day by himself, he heads to the local movie theater where he runs into Eric, fresh out of the Marines. They can’t believe their good fortune as neither has been able to forget about the other in the time they’ve been apart. Catching up and making up for lost time, they give in to the attraction and love that never faded, but real life may yet separate them once again.

The novella, the first I’ve read by this author, started off fine for me. Beta Dean seems like a sweet guy who dreams and thinks occasionally about his lost first love, Eric, but healthily doesn’t overindulge in fantasy or pines away his life. Alpha Eric is trying to figure out what happens next now that his military career is over. Running into each other worked, as did the time they spent together after. It seemed realistic.

In the end I found it to be a middle-of-the-road, sweet tale, but perhaps a little too much so. There is little to no in conflict, even though there is opportunity — perhaps missed — for it. A development later in the story opens the door and I expected it to create an issue between them that would generate discussion and tension, but the scene essentially cuts off and we get an epilogue. I felt a little bit cheated out of seeing them interact when times aren’t so great.

One thing that bothered me a bit — and this will be totally subjective per reader, I think — is that they both kept referring to themselves during the time before they parted as “children,” which frankly was a bit squicky for me:

We were children then, and we’re men now…

I never thought the echoes of what we had as children could possibly last.

Then, they had been children. They’d had no control.

For me, even using the term “kids” would have been better because “children” makes me think of them as pretty darn young.

OVERALL

If you’re looking for a sweet-ish, conflict-free contemporary romance, then you may want to pick this one up.

4 comments

  • Hmm. I didn’t really notice the “children” bit at all. (It’s been a few weeks since I read this one, though, so maybe I did and erased it from my mind?)

    What I did notice, what drove me absolutely insane, was the missing chapters. You know, where the meat of the story, the heart of the conflict, and my reason for reading resided. Those ol’ things.

    The book was sweet and pretty light, which was fine; sometimes I like that. But my payoff for reading was bittersweet–I felt as though I hadn’t worked for the saccharine ending and neither had the characters. Because, you know, the conflict was in the missing chapters.

    Oh look! The hostess just called for my table: Bitter, Party of One. 🙂

  • Great review, Lynn. Sometimes I am in the mood for something sweet and uncomplicated. I’ve just had a run of really emotional, angsty books and this sounds like it would be the ideal antidote to that, so thanks for bringing it to my attention.

  • Lynn
    I don’t really like stories without a bit of conflict. In real life, nothing ever goes smoothly and I don’t expect life to be smooth sailing for protagonists in any story. I don’t think enough authors have grasped the concept that conflicts made their stories more interesting. Also the “children” thing would squick me as well.

    This is what I would consider a sweet Sunday afternoon read, but I hasten to say that there’s nothing wrong with that.

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