Come Unto These Yellow Sands

Title: Come Unto These Yellow Sands
Author: Josh Lanyon
Cover Artist: Kanaxa
Publisher: JustJoshin Publishing
Buy Link: Come Unto These Yellow Sands
Genre: Mystery
Length: 52,000 words (145 pages)
Rating: 5+ stars out of 5

A Guest Review by Damon

REVIEW SUMMARY: A stunning noir-romance that shimmers with pain and poetry

BLURB: Sometimes the adventure chooses you.

Lover of fine poetry and lousy choose-your-own-adventure novels, Professor Sebastian Swift was once the bad-boy darling of the literati. The only lines he does these days are Browning, Frost and Cummings. Even his relationship with the hot, handsome Wolfe Neck Police Chief Max Prescott is healthy.

When one of his most talented students comes to him bruised and begging for help, Swift hands over the keys to his Orson Island cabin—only to find out that the boy’s father is dead and the police are suspicious. In an instant, the stable life Swift has built for himself hangs on finding the boy and convincing him to give himself up before Max figures out Swift’s involvement in the case.

Max enjoys splitting an infinitive or two with his favorite nutty professor, but he’s not much for sonnets or Shakespeare. He likes being lied to even less. Yet his instincts—and his heart—tell him his lover is being played. Max can forgive lies and deception, but a dangerous enemy may not stop until Swift is heading up his own dead poet’s society.


For all the brightness and beauty of this book, I’m gonna go out on a limb and call it a noir and then explain what the hell I mean.

Lanyon’s phenomenal grasp of mystery mechanics and flair for M/M romance makes for a fascinating hybrid here: a romantic noir or maybe bright noir. I don’t mean the Tarantino/Miller pose of noir or post-television noir kitsch, but the detached, harsh starkness of pulp noir made luminous like a shadow pulled inside out. Featuring two appealing, isolated, pained heroes, Come Unto These Yellow Sands forces its lovers to fumble, alone and together and apart, to solve a murder and a disappearance. The crimes feel fresh and motivated and the intimacy scorching. Like many classic noirs, Lanyon’s book starts with a scarred sleuth in stasis and a frantic innocent in peril who promptly vanishes into a fog of misread hints and facts.

Now before I start opining all over the place, a couple things about noir….

Soaked in midcentury paranoia and unsentimental to its core, noir has outgrown its pulpy, cinematic origins into one of the dominant mutations of the crime genre. In pop culture, noir has become a swaggering cartoon in a fedora… but way back at its expressionistic roots, noir represented a shocking split with the cozy, mannered whodunnits that had gone before. From the start, noir was brash and brutal, using tortured protagonists, conflicted motives, kinky violence, and a sense of paranoia to poke at the darkness under the American Dream. (Yum!) Noir earned its name by the shadows of its palette, and what those shadows do primarily is obscure and frame details deceptively. Expectations are a weakness. Snappy dialogue hides slivers of truth. Like poets and lovers, noir foregrounds the life-and-death danger of details. In noir, the facts must be assembled out of skewed misinterpretations and willful blindness.

“If there was one life skill everyone on the planet needed, it was the ability to think with critical objectivity.”

I would argue that what Lanyon realizes and plays with in this novel is the clear, curious overlaps between noir and gay narrative: guilty secrets, hidden lusts, inner conflicts, ironic consequence, even the impossible pressure to conform to a world that devalues individuals.

By the same token, for an isolated gay man no bleak urban landscape could generate the pressure and panic of a small, sunny town in Maine populated by happy heteros. So Lanyon’s figurative shadows fall inside his protagonists; clarity is impossible and misjudgment inevitable because they cannot see and will not reveal what they (think they) know. They flirt with addiction and betrayal. Lanyon gives us a romantic mystery with mature heroes trying to solve a murder and their tangled partnership at the same time.

Lanyon walks a fine line here. There’s a bleak, blunt hopelessness throbbing under the bright streets and rooms of his smalltown Maine setting. He blends in poetry, images, and passionate certainty to balance and give the romance room to breathe. The maudlin self-involvement of the bad poetry Swift wades through even reflects noir just enough to become funny. It’s a tightrope walk well worth the trouble because it saves the book from sentimentality and pessimism both.

Professor and poet Swift has settled into a relationship “left to chance” which is as puzzling and seductive as the crime at the story’s center. Clever, Mr. Lanyon. Swift lies almost from the moment we meet him: to Max, to his agent, to the college staff. For someone longing for integrity and commitment, that kind of gamesmanship rang true (and sad). His blithe detachment about the man he loves does seem almost… well… criminal.

“The good news was he hadn’t been arrested. He had half expected it, but there had been no word from Max at all—that, of course, was also the bad news.”

Swift’s career stalled with a never-completed collection called Blue Knife, the title harshly appropriate since it hurts him so deeply and he has teetered on its edge for so long. Actually, the color blue punctuates the book meaningfully: poetry, institutions, mother, redemption, and more. Swift’s addictions dog him daily and he yearns for romanticism; yet like the most masochistic noir gumshoes, he pines for Max, the one person who could, but cannot, give it to him.

Max embodies the other type of judgmental, hard-handed heroes who populated the pulps. He lives by a rigid code of honor and distrusts people instinctively. His unexpected charm and gruff bluster make for a fiercely sexy alpha male… and a believable small-town cop. The fascination with past pain and tough decisions makes our heroes sexier and riskier. They want to share the clear light of day, but they can’t seem to get to it, together.

And yet this story is not noirish in its warmth, depth, and winning detail. Minor characters present little gems of specificity. Allusions and humor thread through entire plotlines. Lanyon serves up unforgettable snippets of Swift’s startling childhood (which I won’t spoil for you) and sketches his creative paralysis without flashbacks or big slices of exposition cake. As Swift walks into the mystery dropped on his doorstep his complicated backstory blooms around him: the death of his father, his career’s ruin, the addiction that silenced him, his almost-relationship.

Noir is a literature of dissatisfaction and disappointment; its characters want what they cannot have and have what will never want. Time passing, opportunities missed. The neat trick here is that Lanyon uses those lacks as a spur to union.  The unlikely partnership between Swift and Max allows romance a space in all the noir, two detectives investigating from different angles making a perfect team.

Lanyon further isolates them, making Swift and Max the only gay men in their tiny town, unable to be straight with each other (in any sense of the word). They obviously love each other and yet they lie and mistrust so easily. Sex and stakes sizzle between them. Swift’s anxiety and Max’s outrage over their rotten behavior becomes ours. And yet they fit beautifully, with blistering tension. Are they together by choice or circumstance? A larger mystery, that, and the heart of the book.

“People did terrible things to each other—and half the time they did it by accident.”

And by keeping the crime at a distance and the victim unsympathetic, Lanyon allows his two damaged lovers a little island of light in the middle of the nastiness. The crimes are less important than what they reveal about Swift and (to a lesser degree) Max. Their reunion unfolds as a slow mutual taming in which Swift’s fire and Max’s determination fuse happily. The tenderness between them provides perfect contrast to all the enemies from without. Once they solve the mystery, they only have each other and only trust each other.

My only niggle? The second-person Choose-Your-Own-Adventure kickoff to each chapter felt like an extraneous gimmick, especially with so many other complex threads doing heavy lifting. I kept waiting for those “adventure spurs” to gel or land as witty metafiction, but they seemed more like clever pop-culture fragments hammered into service as transitions. Not dire, but not needed.

Lanyon does beautiful work here, and these two men were winning in the extreme. Mystery is not my favorite subgenre of gay romance; I find that machinations tend to get in the way of the relationship, but not here. In fact, not with Lanyon, apparently. Come Unto These Yellow Sands reflects M/M mystery mastery throughout.


Come Unto These Yellow Sands will be available from Samhain Publishing on Tuesday June 14.



  • Thanks gang! The book was so precise that keeping things concise was tricky, so apologies for any meandering in the above.

    The funny thing is that I didn’t know Josh is sort of known for actual, literal noir homage because I’ve not read all his books: a stupid situation I must rectify shortly! I’m a pulp lit fanatic, and it seems like Josh may be as well…

  • Wonderful review Damon!

    I didn’t think it possible but you made me even MORE anxious for the 14th! 😀

  • Thank you Damon for recognizing what a compelling and delightful read Josh Lanyon’s novels are–can’t wait to read this one!

  • I’ve been looking forward to this book, and Damon, such a beautifully written review makes me even more excited.


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Damon Suede grew up out-n-proud deep in the anus of right-wing America, and escaped as soon as it was legal into a career as a crazy word-wrangler and opinion-factory. He reads too much, sleeps too little, and loves his husband a lot.
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