A Chip in His Shoulder (Falling Skies #1)

Title: A Chip in His Shoulder (Falling Skies #1) (Second Edition)
Author: L.A. Witt
Publisher: Self Published
Buy Link: Amazon.com
Genre: Paranormal M/M, Sci-fi
Length: 84 pages/24,600 words
Rating: 5+ stars out of 5

A guest review by Lasha

Summary Review: LA Witt takes the vampire genre into the future with an unique twist that kept me on the edge of my seat throughout!


“Contract killer” is a fitting job for a vampire, and it suits Liam just fine. Cast down from the wealth and status of the Sky for taking a human lover, Liam lurks in the poor and pollution-choked Gutter, killing to survive. Between his natural strengths and his Cybernetix mods, no mark has ever escaped him.

Liam’s ex-lover Daniel is the heir to Cybernetix—and its greatest threat. Horrified by people less man than machine and the exploitation of Gutter factory workers, he’d rather destroy Cybernetix than inherit it…if his father doesn’t destroy him first.

Years of anger and a heap of mods have kept Daniel and Liam apart. When Liam is hired to slaughter a man in his glass Sky tower, he walks right into a Daniel-shaped trap. Daniel’s father has betrayed them both, and only by working together can Daniel and Liam survive the coming day. They have no reason to trust each other, but as the dawn looms, a bargain that began with the simple urge to live soon reminds them of the love they once shared. Can they find each other again, or will the Cybernetix assassins find them first?

Falling Skies Series


I read a lot of books and not all of them are 5 stars. That is not a bad thing, as I have easily enjoyed lower rated books just for fun’s sake. However, LA Witt’s A Chip in His Shoulder has the distinction of being the first book I have ever rated 5 stars on Gay Book Reviews. So, I guess you could say I liked it.

The premise of the book is that Liam, vampire assassin has been contracted to kill his ex-lover Daniel. However, in the middle of the job, he realizes he’s been betrayed by the man who hired him — Daniel’s father — and so Daniel and Liam must work together to survive. Can Liam put aside his grudge against Daniel for getting him tossed out of his wealthy lifestyle five years earlier in order to save them both?

The novella has a definite futuristic and paranormal vibe, in fact the sci-fi angle to me was more prevalent than the romance angle; but don’t worry romance lovers, there is enough sexual tension and heat between Liam and Daniel to satisfy that craving. Set in a world in which there is a huge disparity between the Haves (Sky people) and the Have Nots (Gutter people), L.A. Witt has created a universe that is filled with angst, horror, and despair for certain segments of society and for others, great wealth and power that is being abused to keep the Gutter people down and under their control.

Now what I liked about this book was the thrill per minute the reader felt as they experienced Daniel and Liam’s dilemma to get out of his penthouse alive. The action drove the plot and propelled you into this strange world of nano-technology and body modification. Then, when you combine that with superb writing (and editing), I was pushed out of my usual dislike for anything in the sci-fi genre to cheering for Liam and Daniel to beat the status quo (and the Sky elite). I was especially intrigued with the world building in the book, the difference between the classes, Sky and Gutter and the technology L.A. Witt invented to showcase those differences. And although some of the world building felt a little incomplete at times, I think another installment in this universe would clear that up.

My only niggle was the romance in the story, which is not at the forefront of the story. Now as a romance junkie, I wanted a little more lovin’ between our two protagonists, but the scenes I did get were enough to wet my appetite and keep me reading. So, while us romance lovers may want more of Daniel and Liam between the sheets, the sci-fi/paranormal/action crowd will eat up A Chip in His Shoulder as it has all the elements those readers adore. Overall, this book is (hopefully) a great start to a new series, but if it does turn out to be a stand-alone, then an engrossing read none-the-less. Recommended.



  • Lasha, great review! Now that I’ve read the book I can completely see what you mean and why you liked it so much. I think she did a great job framing the conflict, setting up the world, and yet keeping the basic story containable in a novella. She could do sequels from here and I’d be first in line to buy them. The sex scene we readers eventually get was very hot as well!

  • I’m with Val on this one:), I have to read this book for my challenge and as I’m normally not a fan of paranormal, I’m glad to see your rating! Looking forward to reading it now 🙂 and I def. will return to read the full review after finishing.

  • Thanks for a lovely review, Lasha! My first 5-star on this site — YAY!

    And yes, there IS a sequel in the works. I’m not sure if it’ll be an ongoing series, two books, a trilogy…hard to say. Kind of depends on what Daniel and Liam have up their sleeves. Like none of my other characters, these two really like to run off with things. But yes…there will be a second book which will delve deeper into their histories, their world, etc.

    L. A. Witt

    • I was just about to shut the laptop down for the night and saw that you’re writing a sequel – so pleased to see that (and a great end to my day!) :hurrah:
      I loved this the first time round and have been thinking of rereading it for a while now; definitely worth reading 🙂

    • My first 5 star review too! 🙂 I cannot wait for the sequel. I hope we get to meet Daniel’s a-hole father and he dies a very painful death. 😀

      • There will be more romance in the sequel — just didn’t work for book 1. 🙂 And yes, we will meet Daniel’s father at some point. They haven’t told me all the details on his fate, but I’m sure he’ll get what’s coming to him eventually.

        L. A.

  • I’ll come back and read your review when I’ve finished the book, which I’m reading right now. I just looked at your rating and your summary line — so far, I agree! Story seems fast-paced, extremely well written, and unusual.

  • I keep seeing reviews of this book, and even though I’m not looking for vampire action, I’m intrigued. For me, having the romance more to the side is a big plus. I hate books that are one sex scene after another (which I mostly skip), and then when I’m finished, I wonder where the heck the plot was. At least fan fiction is generally honest about it and has the perfect label: PWP. Plot, what plot?

    • Some days I want more sex scenes, then some days I don’t. *g* While there is a love scene is does not overtake the plot, the action is the driving force in this book.

  • I read this a little while back, and really enjoyed it. I was a little surprised that the romance did take quite a back seat; but the story and world more than made up for that.
    I hadn’t considered whether this could be the start of a series, but now I’m hoping it is – the world was fascinating and I’d love to read more about Daniel and Liam.

    • I was a little surprised about the lack of romance, but for this first book, it seemed to work in regards to the plot.


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I've been reading romance books since I was 12 and when I found m/m books a few years ago I fell madly in love with the genre. My favorites tropes are: GFY, police partners in love and May-December romances. I also adore paranormals and in my spare time away from Jessewave, I review pararmormal m/m books at my own blog. Give me a good shifter book and I'm a happy girl!
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